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Mafia Job Part 1 [REUPLOADED]

By king 697

Mafia Job

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Jun 24 '13
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Added by king 697 on Jun 24 2013, 20:15
REUPLOADED
Added by Toine on Jun 24 2013, 21:31
screeeeen
Added by basketziga on Jun 24 2013, 23:24
Here is my opinion about what I think about your mission:
- you didn't autorun it ( tutorial of how to autorun it: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/showtut/28 )
- your dialogs are bad, you didn't put in any colors ( tutorial: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/showtut/28 ) and every single word start with capital.
- you should put in more logical dialogs

Don't give up, cause this review is bad, just put in more work and your missions will be great ;)
Added by T13 on Jun 25 2013, 11:25
Added to DYOM Graders page.
http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=263&t=561876&st=0#entry1062669246
Added by T13 on Jun 26 2013, 11:30
good mission 3/5

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