My first storyline, made two weeks after I discovered DYOM.
So I can say - It SUCKS! :D But you can try it anyway, :)

Story : After Catalina's dead, Claude went to San Andreas to start a new life. In Liberty City, he worked for many people like Marty Chonks, but he was shoted...did he died? No, and he want revenge, so he'll call his old friend Claude and he wants only one thing, REVENGE!