Mafia Job Part 1 [REUPLOADED]
By king 697
Mafia Job
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Added by king 697 on Jun 24 2013, 20:15
REUPLOADED
Added by Toine on Jun 24 2013, 21:31
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Added by basketziga on Jun 24 2013, 23:24
Here is my opinion about what I think about your mission:
- you didn't autorun it ( tutorial of how to autorun it: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/showtut/28 )
- your dialogs are bad, you didn't put in any colors ( tutorial: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/showtut/28 ) and every single word start with capital.
- you should put in more logical dialogs
Don't give up, cause this review is bad, just put in more work and your missions will be great ;)
- you didn't autorun it ( tutorial of how to autorun it: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/showtut/28 )
- your dialogs are bad, you didn't put in any colors ( tutorial: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/showtut/28 ) and every single word start with capital.
- you should put in more logical dialogs
Don't give up, cause this review is bad, just put in more work and your missions will be great ;)
Added by Target13 on Jun 25 2013, 11:25
Added to DYOM Graders page.
http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=263&t=561876&st=0#entry1062669246
http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=263&t=561876&st=0#entry1062669246
Added by Target13 on Jun 26 2013, 11:30
good mission 3/5
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