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(MOTW#11) Lost Friends

By Maaz 45

(MOTW#11) Lost Friends

Missions is made for MOTW#11.

A guy named Pastor with his girlfriend Sarah was in beach Sarah disappear from beach then what happens?

Bugs:When you go through then you will see Sarah also to kill just ignore it.

When escaping from kidnapper's hideout quickly remove that car otherwise your mission will failed.

When kidnapers follow you kill them by getting out of car.

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Added by Target13 on Jul 27 2014, 21:13
Your mission lacks something very important called LOGIC.

1-Sarah disappears? Seriously. Suddenly disappears??
2-Pastor somehow knows where Sarah is being held.
3-Sarah is able to fight waves of enemies when she is injured

And much more.

This mission is a joke. I highly doubt you will win MOTW 11. Unless your "Allah" loves you very much.
Added by Maaz 45 on Jul 27 2014, 22:16
1.I've shown some effects like teargas.
2.Well i hate players going in car to there destination.
3.He brought Aid Kit to cure her.

Still afraid!
Added by Target13 on Jul 27 2014, 22:54
1-It was more like shell fell into the water (Also there was nobody around)
2-You should atleast add a cutscene showing Pastor arriving to the location
3-It was off screen. (Maybe you should add some dialogue to let the player know what's going on.)
Added by Target13 on Jul 27 2014, 22:55
she*
Added by Maaz 45 on Jul 27 2014, 23:12
Well T13 you are right but too late if i edit everything will screw up!
Added by GTAIVFan17 on Jul 28 2014, 14:27
How will you screw the mission up? And T13's points are correct, I never take part in these MOTW but when make a mission, take the time to go over your mission and take time on things to improve, that's what I do when I design missions, make sure they are fine to publish.
Added by Maaz 45 on Jul 29 2014, 12:10
Alright
Added by gheorghem on Jul 30 2014, 23:44
the good:
1) the decorations were ok
2) the story is interesting
3) the shootouts not too hard

the bad: (as mentioned by T13)
1) how did Sarah disappear?
2) how did Pastor find her?
3) I couldn't escape the area, there were no blips or anything! =(

Overal: The mission has potential, but, in the state in which it's now, it's unfinished.
Added by gheorghem on Jul 30 2014, 23:45
I'll give you 3 stars because it has potential. If you finish it, I might give you more! ;)
Added by gheorghem on Jul 30 2014, 23:50
oh yeah, and I couldn't finish it =(
Added by Maaz 45 on Aug 04 2014, 17:44
1.By throwing sand on Pastor's eye.

2.I hate players reach at destination........

3.Just go through right and search for grill brake the object that's it!

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