The good:
1) The sounds! - very good immerision! The HL sounds are a nice touch, and the music from the final battle made me feel like I was playing Duke Nukem 3D! (one of my fav. games)
2) The guns - well placed, enough ammo.
3) The battles - challenging, but not too difficult.
4) The story - interesting, seems to have a twist.
5) The mission - very good, looks highly professional!

The bad:
1) Camera angles - the first cutscene had the camera too low, or too on the side, the other ones are fine.
2) Eam jumped off the balcony but didn't die (though it may just be the game engine).

The ugly:
1) Why are most enemies tramps and old people?
2) Certain objects seemed out of place (e.g. this is a hotel, what's with the crates?)
3) How did Wang get past the place where Bobby died, and why didn't he know that Bobby died? Did he use a different route?
4) Why did Wang leave his daughter if he was so against it in the beginning?
5) Why didn't Wang help in the fights?

Overal:
Good job (though there are some unanswered questions). This is indeed a 5 star mission! (after all, the negative aspects are so tiny, they may as well be ignored)

oh yeah, I forgot to mention in The Ugly - there's the grammar issue in some parts of the mission...

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