My very first mission, so please give me feedback. I have kept it simple and easy, so don't expect too much challenge. And please excuse my English, its not my first language. More parts should be coming soon.

Story

Carl has joined as the bodyguard of Sonia McCarthy, daughter of one of San Andreas richest businessman, Paul McCarthy. Carl wanted to get into SWAT, but due to his criminal background, the Govt was not interested.

So, Carl made this career choice, looking for a life of adventure. But for the past few days, he has been reduced to a rich girl's errand boy. Feeling dejected, Carl still hopes for an exciting adventure. His dream is about to become a reality.

Please give your feedback at :-

http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&f=246&t=441554

Thanks.