It was actually nice, it was a bit too easy, a bit of grammar and spelling problems there and there, but not too awful, you seems like a beginner, and you always have room to improve, who knows, you might have the skill of THBP or Target13 someday! The cutscene were basic, and I had problem with the start since I spawn in the Dillimore Police HQ instead of Pershing Square, but too bad, motw 172 just ended on 12 december. 3/5

Also about MOTW, you should check the deadline first, in the GTAForums topic of

Also about MOTW, you should check the deadline first, in the GTAForums topic of the latest MOTW, you do have to work fast since you only have 5 days to make your entry (and you can ask the host to extend the deadline), make sure it follows the theme, and then after you uploaded your entry, you give the link to the topic (you do have to make a GTAForums account if you don't have it yet).

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